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I am a 20 year old college student that loves hockey. I have been a fan of the New Jersey Devils since I was 5 and some people refer to me as a walking encyclopedia of hockey information. I joined Bleacher Report to write my opinion and not to try to become a serious sports writer. Anyone that chooses to edit my article please do not butcher it by turning every sentence into a new paragraph or removing entire thoughts.
I noticed youre a die hard devils fan. Im new to this site and was wonderig if you could take a peek at my article as well as give me some feedback. Ill add my name to your fan page. Thanks,
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Hey David—Dave Mo here, a Bleacher Report Community Coordinator.
I've been spending time on our Devils page and read a couple of your old articles. Really on-point analysis...you do good work.
Given that you haven't written in a while, I thought I'd check in and see if you're interested in picking up your coverage again. What do you say?
If not, it would be great if you could give me some feedback on why you decided to stop writing and what we could have done to better serve you. If you wouldn't mind, please shoot me a line at firstname.lastname@example.org with any thoughts.
Thanks so much,
David, I'm not working in firefox today, so here's some editor's feedback.
Great article! I tweaked your headline, formatted the spacing of the subheadings, and edited for style. Make sure everything checks out to your liking—keep up the awesome work!
So sorry for any misunderstanding with regard to numbers. I was just following Bleacher Report's Style Guide, which holds that numbers one through nine are to be spelled out, while numbers 10 and up are to appear in numeral form. With that said, you're certainly free to compose your articles however you'd like! And I look forward to reading more.
Thanks and all best,